Tuesday, November 8, 2016

Lee Ji Won/ Meaningful Place First Draft/ Thursday 1-3 pm

201502643 Lee Ji Won

 

The air in the study room of Ulsan Foreign Language High school was always quite stuffy. Rather than a relaxed atmosphere, there was a tension in the room, full of 175 senior students who all concentrated on their studies. How could I always endure two hundred minutes every day sitting at a desk for three years? I had feelings of both love and hatred toward the study room. While I was sick to death of studying at that room, it was still the place full of precious high school memories.

 Walking along the slope leading to the study room, I could smell food odors of that day's evening menu since our school cafeteria was next to the slope. While walking up, I could see far in distance that the front gate of the study room was crowded with students waiting for it to be opened. The gate was painted in blue and since the doorknob was quite slippery, we often could hear the door slam if someone miss the doorknob. In front of the door, there were always tons of scrap papers and completed workbooks which showed how fierce we were at studying.

  We each had our own designated desks and chairs. Since the size of the desk was just a little bit larger than our body and every desk was separated by partitions, it was such an optimized atmosphere to concentrate on studies. Most of the students sit properly on their chairs but there were some students who kept studying while standing, not to be drowsy. The study room was filled with the sound of student's writing sound and sometimes we could hear a recurring beep of the timer which somebody set for the end time of a math test.

 I also studied hard. Well, you know in my own way. I used to secretly watch movie or listen to the music after a short 30 minutes studying. Since both of them were not allowed, I put the earphones only in my right ear in order to know if teacher is coming or not by concentrating my left ear to the sound of stilettos on the marble lobby. One of the other thrilling moments was when I secretly ate snacks with my friend who sat right next to me. Both of us loved salty corn-based snacks which was quite hard that we almost should melt it in our mouth not to make eating noises.

 When the bell sounded for 20 minutes break time, students ran excitedly outside to use a vending machine. It was like I was in the middle of an earthquake hearing the footsteps of almost five hundred students all together. I loved that short 20 minutes when I put my head down on the desk to sleep for a while, wrapping myself in a fluffy blanket. Although the chair was very stiff, it didn't matter since I was sitting on such a soft sitting cushion. Then my eyelids grew heavy with sleep slowly. A babble of voices stopped all of a sudden and the study room became as silent as death with a sound of bell informing the start of second period. These same routines were repeated every day in our study room. Although I was sometimes tired of these monotonously repetitive routine, it obviously was and is a precious place that shows our passion toward studying and our friendship.  

 

2 comments:

  1. I liked how descriptive your essay was - I could easily picture every detail you described in my head as I read on. I think my favorite part would be "sound of stilettos on the marble lobby." I can instantly picture whose footsteps they belong to and what sound they would have made on the marble floors. The place you described was descriptive enough for me to understand how this place showed your passion for studying and your friendships. Though I do think it would give me a better idea of how it was a place for friendship if you gave another example showing it? Your example of sharing snacks is lovely but I think you could paint a clearer picture by giving more examples! The place you described brings an oddly home-like feeling to me somehow as well, as it is also an atmosphere I once experienced.

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  2. 201502643 Lee Ji Won

    Precious Memories at Our Studyroom

    When I look back upon my high school days, the first thing that comes to my mind is our study room. I can still remember a unique smell of that newly built study room and stuffy air of it even though it’s been almost two years since I didn’t go there after graduation. Maybe it’s because the place itself means a lot to me. I had feelings of both love and hatred toward that place. While I was sick to death of studying at that room, it was still the place full of precious high school memories.

    Walking along the slope leading to the study room, I could smell food odors of that day's evening menu since our school cafeteria was next to the slope. While walking up, I could see far in distance that the front gate of the study room was crowded with students waiting for it to be opened. The gate was painted in blue and since the doorknob was quite slippery, we often could hear the door slam if someone misses the doorknob. In front of the door, there were always tons of scrap papers and completed workbooks which showed how fierce we were at studying.

    There were 180 desks and chairs each in our study room for 175 senior students including me who were always busy preparing university entrance exams. We each had our own designated seats numbered from 1 to 175. Since the size of the desk was just a little bit larger than our body and every desk was separated by partitions, it was such an optimized atmosphere to concentrate on studies. Most of the students sat up straight on their chairs but there were some students who kept their studies while standing, not to be drowsy. The study room was filled with the sound of student's writing sound and sometimes we could hear a recurring beep of the timer which somebody set for the end time of a math test.

    I also studied hard, though not entirely for two hundred minutes. I used to secretly watch movie or listen to the music after a short 30 minutes studying. Since both of them were not allowed, I put the earphones only in my right ear in order to know if teacher is coming or not by concentrating my left ear to the sound of stilettos on a marble lobby. One of the other thrilling moments was when I secretly ate snacks with my friend who sat right next to me. Both of us loved salty corn-based snacks which was quite hard that we almost should melt it in our mouth not to make eating noises.

    When the bell sounds for 20 minutes break time, my friends used to run excitedly outside to use a vending machine. It was like I was in the middle of an earthquake, hearing the footsteps of almost five hundred students all together. I loved that short 20 minutes when I put my head down on the desk to sleep for a while, wrapping myself in a fluffy blanket. Although the chair was very stiff, it didn't matter since I was sitting on such a soft sitting cushion. Then my eyelids grew heavy with sleep slowly. A babble of voices stopped all of a sudden and the study room became as silent as death with a sound of bell informing the start of second period.

    These same routines were repeated every day in our study room. Although I was sometimes tired of these monotonously repetitive routine, I could endure it thanks to my lovely friends. We encouraged each other. We often exchanged letter even when it was not a special day like birthday. My friends used to write motivational quote about studying for me and sometimes they included printed pictures of our dream university campus with the letter. It was like my studying was going well at the day when I got letter from my friends.

    Like this, sometimes I was really fed up with studying that I wished the building of study room to be collapsed, it obviously was and is a precious place for me that shows our passion toward studying and our friendship. I really miss there and I hope I can visit there again soon.

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